I consider Nathan Sorry a “living document”, in that anything is fair game for me to go back and change or improve upon. I plan on using this space to notify readers of any of these changes as a way of being transparent but I also don’t plan on doing it a whole lot if I don’t have to. I mean, I’d love to redraw so many panels in the first chapter and someday I will have to but I can’t let myself go backwards right now.
Something I felt I really had to do though was change one panel on page 3. Originally, the first panel of the page, which shows a quick flashback of Nathan passed out in bed was colored in a gold yellow rather than the greenish blue I use for every other panel. My thinking had been to use the yellow to help cue the reader that these panels were flashbacks. But then on page 13, the next time one of these flashback panels came up I decided that I just didn’t like how this color looked in large amounts. Plus, I’m not sure I really plan to use one-panel flashbacks as often as I might have thought. There’s going to be a lot of flashbacks in this story (we’re in one right now) so I don’t think I need a visual cue other than the change in scenery, clothing, hairstyle, etc to tell the reader what’s what.
My next potential big change might be rewording some of the dialogue in the first chapter. You don’t know how many times I’ve already rewritten that scene but as I go along minor details of certain things, like Pryor’s plan, wind up changing. So it’s possible at some point I might change that first conversation but it won’t be anything major.
I won’t even get into the typos I just went back and fixed. Or the ones I probably haven’t even noticed yet.