- Like I mentioned in the notes for the last page, I rewrote this scene numerous times at the last minute eventually settling on a simpler, less wordy version. This isn’t even am important part of this scene really. More of a bridge to what is to come. Sometimes it’s these kind of scenes that wear you out and make you work that much harder I guess.

- It’s been a long time since I drew rain and I am sure I’ve never inked it so I actually had to look around at how other artist’s handle it before I could do the first panel on this page. My recent fallback artist for inspiration is Naoki Urasawa and Volume 6 of Pluto has a really good rain scene.

- Not much more to say here but the next page things start getting weird.